Year 13 Top Girls revision and essay feedback

Dear everyone,

thank you for your excellent attention in the lesson today. I know it was intensive but am hoping it was helpful and thought provoking. I loved reading your responses – very engaging and perceptive. Please can you complete your ‘reflection sheet’ and attach it to the essay (include my feedback sheet please) and submit by next Monday. Please include thoughts on how your essay went and if you understand how to improve. It would help me also to know what was useful in today’s feedback.  Here are the slides: angie-essay-feedback

Thank you so much for the character profiles submitted so far, here they are:

the-waitress

mrs-kidd

marlene

joyce

angie-word-doc

dull-gret-word-doc

isabella-bird

shona

jeanine

marlene-characterisation

patient-griselda

lady-nijo

nell

kit

win

Image result for revision

 

 

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